The L. Frank Baum's The Marvelous Land of Oz screenplay is continuing! But currently I've made a few changes.
1. Jellia Jamb was dismissed from her position by Jinjur, but her keys were not take from her. She uses these to open the doors of the palace for the Scarecrow.
2. Jinjur locks up the palace. As a result, she is surprised to see the Scarecrow & Co. enter, but not worried.
3. Mombi appears and tells Tip that she's going to turn him into marble, instead of Jinjur threatening everyone else.
4. The Scarecrow lets the Field Mice free to stop Mombi. As a result, all females flee the throne room.
In addition, the posititioning of some speeches and events are altered for better drama.
Comment and tell me what you think!
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